Talk:Yuen method
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This is my first article. I hope I did everything right. Beren323 04:06, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- Quite acceptable. Try and see if you can find articles to link some of the names in the article to. __meco 11:53, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
It is a very well-written article. My only complaint is that it is very vague. For how long the article is, it merely describes what the Yuen method is not without giving any indication of what it is. Again, I don't mean to be disrespectful, but your article comes across as a vague advertisement for rather than an actual description of this topic. Reverendlondo 15:31, 7 November 2007 (UTC)

