Talk:Yip Man

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I corrected some grammatical errors. There will be more updates when I have time.

[edit] Fixed grammar.

"The man who Yip Man competed against was beaten within a few strikes"

Means the opposite of what really happened. I've changed this to:

"The man who Yip Man competed against beat him with a few strikes."

[edit] add the reason for his death

I think that would be a good idea to add the reason for death wing chun's legend: cigarettes. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 200.169.221.179 (talk) 17:43, 11 March 2008 (UTC)

You'd need to find a verifiable source to back that up before you could add it. --Marty Goldberg (talk) 18:11, 11 March 2008 (UTC)