Talk:Tower Theatre (Bend, Oregon)

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[edit] Fresh start

OK, my second first attempt on getting a page started. I hope this write up follows the guidelines a bit better. I am sure the text needs some further massaging to look pretty, but hopefully some seasoned writers will come to assist. Nostrada 06:45, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

If I recall correctly the first try was a copy and paste from the theatre's website, so this is much better. Two suggestions--first take out anything that might be original research, next, I take it your only source is the theatre's website? At minimum this should be cited at the end of every paragraph, but then some other Reliable sources should be found to give a rounded perspective to the article. Finally, any reason you didn't recreate this at Tower Theatre (Bend, Oregon)? If the "The" is not an integral part of the name, I'd like to move the article to the version without the "The". Katr67 12:42, 16 October 2007 (UTC)
I will talk to the folks there and see if they have further resources and/or if they allow to quote their website. Please feel free to move the article using the "The" in the title - my bad. I will hopefully be able to update this soon - thanks! Nostrada 05:47, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Possible refs for expansion

Katr67 (talk) 23:33, 25 March 2008 (UTC)