Talk:The Queen's School, Chester

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Victuallers 18:40, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] The state of this article

The article is of very poor encyclopaedic quality: its prose was littered with adjectives whose purpose was to boost the reputation of the school with no attempt to cite any of the claims made. It read and still reads like an advertising blurb. It needs to have numerous references added to back up its various claims, which if they are what they were claimed to be, mist surely be capable of being cited. If they cannot be cited, they should not be in the article. I have tagged some of them, but most of them could be tagged. This article needs to be improved quickly by anyone able to do so, otherwise it may suffer by being perceived mainly as advertisement copy for some recruitment scheme for pupils. Reading WP:V, WP:CITE, and WP:References would indicate just how much work this article needs to even reach an appropriate sub-level B status.  DDStretch  (talk) 23:40, 20 February 2008 (UTC)