Talk:Teresa Demjanovich

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In my opinion there is an underlying currect of POV prevalent in this article, such as frequent references to an assumed "God" and to the reader. Thoughts? K-UNIT 03:41, 31 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Excessive hagiography

This article is seriously flawed. It reads as OTT religious hagiography. Any time of hagiography (whether in rock music, religion, on politics, sex or anything else) is a no-no on Wikipedia. Hagiography involves an almost propagandistic tone of devotion that is not NPOV. This article needs severe rewriting to remove the devotional tone. Overall there is the bones of a good article here. It is just swamped with hagiographic tones. FearÉIREANN\^(caint) 13:46, 6 August 2006 (UTC)