Talk:Subway Hero

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	Subway Hero has been listed as one of the Arts good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can delist it, or ask for a reassessment.
May 27, 2008 Good article nominee Listed

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[edit] GA review

The GA review of this article is currently taking place at /GA1, and is transcluded below.

[edit] GA review 1

• "series' co-executive producer Jack Burditt" - producer should be plural? commas needed too
• "The credits in the episode also, jokingly, lists the Lord Stanley Cup as a guest star" - lists shouldn't have an s if credits is plural (check this sort of thing throughout)
• Is there really no more info on production? Doesn't seem broad...
  • Nothing that I can find -- Jamie jca (talk) 18:40, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
• "On the newspaper presented on Liz by Jenna" - huh??
• "Tim Conway guest starred in this episode as, the 1950s television star, Bucky Bright." - needs copyedit, those commas make it read poorly
• "from the program which aired prior to it, My Name Is Earl" - which episode?
• IGN shouldn't have italics (in reception section), check all others
  • Wikipedia:MOST#Examples -- Jamie jca (talk) 18:40, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
    • Wikipedia:ITALICS#Italic_type - it's a website, so doesn't fall under those categories. See also its article. dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 09:11, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
      • Removed italics from all non-newspapers/magazines. -- Jamie jca (talk) 18:54, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Please leave a note on my talk page when you're done with these comments. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 01:57, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

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Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H₂O) 09:16, 27 May 2008 (UTC)