Talk:Starving Time (Jamestown)
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The article (and the "Did you know") both start out with "Less than 100... " . When I attempted to edit this (+), the text came up with the correct "Fewer than 100... " I can't imagine why this did not carry through immediately, as the editing tool promises.70.156.25.186 11:06, 22 January 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Lead section
The lead for this article contains more paragraphs than recommended by Wikipedia:Lead section, especially given the relatively short article length. This article would be improved by having a shorter, more concise lead. Mmoyer 20:50, 11 October 2007 (UTC)

