Talk:Soiling

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I have cleaned this article up: I have worded it so non-medical readers can understand. I have organised it. I put references to it. I have removed the cleanup-tag.

I welcome any suggestions to improve or correct the article.Aberpete 00:58, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

This reads like something you'd expect from a grade 6 or 7 assignment on Soiling. 60.226.121.204 13:14, 23 April 2006 (UTC)

This needs more work -- fix quotes to be English-style "", spelling errors. laurap414 03:58, 2 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Please, someone has to fix this

Someone who is well-educated in pediatrics really needs to fix this... it's been tagged for a while. Dagron12345 00:16, 1 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] This one

This article need a thorough lesson in Wikipedia:What Wikipedia is not. It reads as an instruction manual, which it should not. Joffeloff 00:52, 1 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Best Content Name Ever?

I nominate Mechanisms of Soiling: A Vicious Circle as the most creative name ever. I like the drawing, in fact all drawings should be replaced with paint drawings. Not really, this is bad, although hilarity ensues when reading it.

I agree, this sounds like some sick, twisted 6th grader's science fair project, and I found the heading pretty amusing. Rem523 06:27, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

I personally love "Mechanics of Soiling: A vicious Circle." It is certainly the most creative name ever, and any future attempts to clean up this article should at least attempt to conserve it as a sub-heading.(Nickers 03:56, 29 May 2007 (UTC))

[edit] Propaganda

This article is written either in the tone of a propaganda article, or an encyclopedic satire. Needless to say, this article is in desperate need of revision, preferably with someone in the field of pediatric care. --Scottica 08:17, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Adding External Link for Encopresis.org to Soiling

I added an external link for encopresis.org to your encopresis page sometime ago where it has remained. It provides an important commercial free parents forum for children with encopresis or enuresis. I require moderated registration for joining in order to exclude spammers which has virtually destroyed the aboutencopresis.com forum which was a major forum provided by emedicine.com in cooperation with the U of VA. It is a very rapidly growing forum which I provide as a free public service. I would like to add this same link to the soiling page.

Bobpsy 14:53, 31 August 2007 (UTC)bobpsy

[edit] Pictures

The pics on this page look like bad quality things made on Paint. Please fix them. Codelyoko193 Talk HHC! 13:42, 1 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] You can help!

If someone has five or ten minutes to strip all the unnecessary bold text out of this article, that would really help. (Just about everything that's in bold-face text now, except the first use of the main title ("Soiling"), should be turned into plain text.) I cleaned up one section, and all the rest need similar attention.

Also, several of the "bulleted lists" should be just plain old paragraphs. I think this will look more like an encyclopedia article if we do that. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:05, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Scratch that

This should just be merged into Encopresis instead of being repaired. The merge proposal is being discussed at Talk:Encopresis. If there are no objections, I'd appreciate it if one of these pages regular editors would merge the pages in a few days. Thanks, WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:16, 2 January 2008 (UTC)