Talk:Six Moments Musicaux (Rachmaninoff)

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[edit] Good Article candidate

I think this is a perfect example of a "Good Article" so I'll add it to the list. It's an interesting read, and the music and notation samples add a lot. Good use of wikilinks. My comments for improvement include:

  • I don't think the abbreviations (ff) and English definitions of dynamic markings are necessary. Link some of them instead.
  • In general it is better to work text like "(see Foo)" into the article somehow.
  • It reads very well, but there are areas for improvement in the writing. A copyedit would reduce instances of "approximately" and exchange "massive" and "hugely" for something a bit more professional-sounding. I was not sure if "quasi-miliary" had a "t" missing or not.
  • Anything on the critical reception of the work as a whole would be a bonus.

I hope you continue improving composition articles to this extent! –Outriggr ♠ 02:06, 29 August 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for your review and conclusion. I will take your points into consideration as I continue editing. ALTON .ıl 05:10, 29 August 2007 (UTC)