Talk:San Felipe del Progreso
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[edit] Comments
Article could stand substantial copyediting. Words like "beautiful" aren't really encyclopedic and should probably be removed. John Carter (talk) 17:54, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Town Municipality
I think this is about the municipality but I will check with the student. Thelmadatter (talk) 23:53, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Copyedit
I've copyedited the article. However there are some confusing statements:
- if the minimum temperarture is 2 degrees celsius then how can there be frosts in february and march?
- if the exceptions to the rule about catolicism being the predominant religion are San Agustin Mextepec and Mayorazgo then which religion do they have there?
- The phrase about forest wealth and excessive logging is not intelligible.
- The section about important people should also describe why they are important. And probably that section should be scrapped altogether - unless some of those people are important enough to have their own article on wikipedia.·Maunus· ·ƛ· 15:33, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
