Talk:Peter Shurman

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

This article must adhere to the policy on biographies of living persons. Controversial material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted or if there are other concerns relative to this policy, report it on the living persons biographies noticeboard.

This page is about an active politician who is running for office, is in office and campaigning for re-election, or is involved in some political conflict or controversy. Because of this, this article is at risk of biased editing, talk-page trolling, and simple vandalism.

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography. For more information, visit the project page.	Biography Portal
Stub	This article has been rated as Stub-Class on the project's quality scale. [FAQ]
	This article is supported by the Politics and government work group.

This article has been put together really haphazardly.

With Peter now running for a seat in the legislature is it possible someone could clean this up? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.248.190.87 (talk) 03:27, August 30, 2007 (UTC)

[edit] References!

First off, just wondering why there are so few references for this article?

undertaking an assignment to grow a minor Toronto paging company, into one of the area's largest and most important operators in only eighteen months

This is extremely vague.

Political Career: The article states that Shurman's election was due to the faith-based funding policy, which is correct, however it is incorrect to write that it was due to his support of it. Shurman never supported the faith-based policy, he just happened to be running in the right party at the right time (under John Tory) in the right riding (Thornhill). And here is a reference: http://yorkregion.com/News/Thornhill/article/53663

Anyway this article may be doing more harm than good right now, I hope a dedicated Wiki-er will clean it up. I really appreciate the work you guys do.

theripper - 99.237.215.17 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.237.215.17 (talk) 00:33, 22 November 2007 (UTC)