Talk:Oh, Kay!
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[edit] Good progress
Looking forward to Act II of the synopsis! -- Ssilvers (talk) 18:36, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Act One ambiguities
When Jimmy and Constance are introduced, I feel that it is not clear enough that they have just been married. I don't want to make the synopsis too long, but I feel that could use some clarification. Is it ok if I try to fix that? If someone else would like to do that, that would be fine too.MarianKroy (talk) 19:25, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- Sure. I put in a couple of words of clarification, but feel free to re-do it if you can think of a better way. -- Ssilvers (talk) 04:54, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
It looks good to me. Thanks!MarianKroy (talk) 17:39, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
