Talk:New Epoch Notation Painting

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[edit] Huh?

I have no idea what this article is about and I have degrees in Philosophy and Art History. I understand the concept of notation and am familiar with Kandinsky...but it doesn't seem to help me here! I also see many sources in the citation section indicating that something *can* be said about the subject in a non-obscure way. The article is incoherent and assumes that the reader already has some knowledge of the subject, which, it must be said, is also obscure. Saudade7 08:15, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Clarify claims

The article should point out why this notation claims to be the first of its kind. How does it differ from Bezier curves, for example? How does it differ from general movement notations (e.g. Labanotation)? Burschik (talk) 15:22, 6 June 2008 (UTC)