Talk:Kareela, New South Wales

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[edit] my edits

'seems to have been chosen' - changed to 'was'. reason: either it was or wasn't. if we're not sure, then don't mention it (no room for speculation here). if it was, then say it was.

deleted 'vast': i'm perfectly happy to state that the shopping centre isn't 'vast'. it's a suburban shopping centre of nowhere near the size of say, the nearby miranda westfield, which is much more accurately described as vast.

'They also have a' to 'There is also a': i prefer the wording. so shoot me.

'Practise' to 'Practice': that's how it's spelt. see [Family Practice]. - Dibo 23:31, 11 September 2006 (UTC)