Talk:Juan Bosch/Comments

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This entry does not seem particularly objective, and it is not written in an appropriate style. See, for example, "To this day, he is remembered as an honest man of principle. Over the years, as his luck rose and fell, his political direction oscillated wildly." or "Juan Bosch -Don Juan, as he is affectionately remembered by many..." or "Besides, he didn't return to the Dominican Republic but until April of 1970." Additionally, there are no citations. I thought I'd ask for other comments before making any changes - this is my first foray into editing Wikipedia. 68.190.117.15 (talk) 00:04, 7 February 2008 (UTC)