Talk:Jack Randall (English actor)

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[edit] Cleanup for Tone

The history of revisions of the accompanying article is strikingly consistent with autobio:

1. the creator has edited only on 3 pages,
2. over the span of 2.5 hours,
3. only concerning this actor,
4. description of him
   1. as "becom[ing] friends" with the chaperone/mentor/star/"captain"-of-the-production suggests a youthful mis-self-perception, or at least mis-emphasis,
   2. as does "star" for what others call a "minor role". (He also falls 7th in the cast list, which may even exaggerate his significance, since it appears to be ordered to keep identical naval ranks together, and alpha within the 5 midshipmen.)
      

IMO further attention by others would be well spent.
--Jerzy•t 18:28, 9 April 2008 (UTC)