Talk:ISCAR Metalworking
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[edit] Run by one person?
Gilabrand - Here's what the Times reference says: "The company prides itself on its levels of automation, which enables the plant to be run at night by one person, at home, on their computer." Saying: "Utilizing modern technology Iscar's factory is controlled by one person sitting at his home computer." isn't faithful to the reference and misleads the reader. Instead of deleting the sentence out-right I made an attempt to fix it. Sorry if the sentence is a bit clunky, perhaps you could find a better way to reword without losing the meaning, or be more specific with what's wrong with the grammar and I'll give it another try.Mirboj (talk) 11:39, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
