Talk:Globalization and disease

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[edit] Clean-up edits

This article was quite good, but needed some help, mostly in sytle and references which I have fixed. Reference #25? I don't see it, can someone add it back in, using the wikisyntax of the other refs as a template?

The article did ramble on a bit, which is probably why it looks like large amounts of text were removed, but really most articles really do read better without wordiness, please don't take that as a criticism.

The page needed to be renamed to conform with the WP:MOS andWikipedia:Naming conventions which reads "Do not capitalize second and subsequent words unless the title is a proper noun (such as a name) or is otherwise almost always capitalized".

The article was really quite interesting though, good job. Any questions, please feel free to contact me.--DO11.10 19:39, 29 December 2006 (UTC)