Talk:Gas detector

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I, Jeff D'Antonio, the author of “Gas Detectors General Information” on Discountsafetygear.com. Also the original article is under a GFDL license, and free for public use.


Copyright (c) 2007 Jeff D’Antonio. Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License, Version 1.2 or any later version published by the Free Software Foundation; with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts. A copy of the license is included in the section entitled "GNU Free Documentation License".


Created: July 26, 2007 —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Jeff dantonio (talk • contribs).

While the author has created permission to use his text here, I'm not sure that a straight copy-and-paste — which is what the largely appears to be — is suitable. It is too specific and technical for the subject, and does nothing to give a general read of what gas detectors actually are. The article needs a major rewrite. Realkyhick 18:39, 11 August 2007 (UTC)