Talk:FAIR School

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ahhh its prettdfgy—Preceding unsigned comment added by Stonesoup99 (talk • contribs) 19:52, 1 March 2007

[edit] Photos and concerns

None of the photos in this article have captions. Also, if you look at the image page for each of them, it looks like they were uploaded without proper usage. Please caption them and size them down to a reasonable size. The one above the visual arts section doesn't seem to serve any real purpose. I don't believe it is work of one of the school's students, is it?

I also added the template about the overall tone of the article. This is written badly. --EarthPerson 15:50, 9 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Tone/editing

I changed some of the spelling errors and grammar mistakes, and did some work on the tone. Should there be references to individual teachers in this article? --Murmur74

Probably not. The person associated with the school who was the primary author (WP:COI) appears to have left this and WP back in April. This should just be a stub, if even that. I'll see what I can do with it. Cheers. --EarthPerson 02:32, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
Looks much better! I removed most of the teacher names and did some additional copy editing. I changed 'Arts' to 'Departments' - what do you think?--Murmur74 14:36, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
Nice work! Some of it still sounds like it was written by students.  :) The more I look at the websites, I think it may end up as either three articles: WMEP, FAIR and IDDS, or just an article on WMEP with sections on the two schools. I say this after reading this page and this page from the WMEP site. Thanks. --EarthPerson 15:23, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
looks like you're right - these are the two magnet schools that are part of a greater consortium designed to desegregate the district...interesting in light of the recent supreme court decision, Parents v. Seattle and Meredith v. Jefferson. i'm going to start the wmep page...

--Murmur74 15:33, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

Okay. I've got the list of school districts as wiki-links already for WMEP. I was working on it in notepad last night. I'll put them in when I see you make the page. --EarthPerson 15:38, 1 July 2007 (UTC)
page created! I did a disambig for WMEP - and created the page as West Metro Education Program. Bare bones at this point - also am super new at wiki, and can't figure out how to have FAIR not internally link to the word, versus the school, without including 'school' in the title?

--Murmur74 15:55, 1 July 2007 (UTC)