Talk:Epidemiological transition

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"In those more economically developed countries more people die from degenerative diseases as those infectious diseases such as cholera and typhoid are easily treated causing more people to die from cancers as they live longer."

This sentence doesn't make sense, or rather it doesn't make for clear reading. Please change, author. Thank you very much for the article as well.

[edit] poor

The sentence makes sense but the article is very poor, will try and clean it up over the summer. Supposed (talk) 02:18, 27 May 2008 (UTC)