Talk:Crocodile Lake National Wildlife Refuge
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This is where my group members can alert me of any changes that they have made to the article and ask questions they may have for me. 1013-andy 03:43, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] Discussion: Dan
Hey Andy. Sorry this is so late but Ive been trying to find something that I can help you with your article. However, your article looks perfect to me and it seems you have everything under control. Good job. 1013-Dan 15:18, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Discussion: Kate
Hey Andy, I love this article and I love how into this you're getting :)! One question I had while reading your article is what is a hardwood hammock? I'm assuming it's a type of tree but you might want to add a sentence about it. You might also consider adding a "History" section, because there are several places that you mention neat history facts but they are really spread out. Your article is realy interesting and I can't wait to keep watching it! 1013-kate 17:01, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
- Okay, sweet advice. Yeah, I do need to elaborate the hardwood hammock part a little more... you're right, it's a tree (spreads out like a real hammock... it's cool... check out one of the pictures in the art gallery... you can see it there. 1013-andy 01:05, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
Ok, so I'm really trying to find some more links and sites for you to use, but it kindof seems like either you already have most of the information or the sites I find are saying the same things as the ones you already have. I did find this link although I'm not sure how helpfull it will be, but the links on the site might have something helpfull too. I'm sorry I can't find much but I don't think I can beat you with calling the guy at the refuge! I'll keep looking though, here's the link: http://www.stateparks.com/crocodile_lake.html 128.101.211.210 02:28, 2 May 2007 (UTC) Woops sorry I got loged out somehow! 1013-kate 02:31, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
- Haha, no don't worry about it. Any information is great! Thanks for looking! I'm checking out the information right now and I'll see what I can do! Thanks. 1013-andy 14:46, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Discussion: Precious
Hey Andy, I read your article and looked it over for grammar and spelling, i changed a couple of things, but overall it was good. I think you picked a great topic that people want know alot about and that's good. As far a your article i think it's organozed well, and the pictures add alot of depth to the article. You are on a great start and with a little more work you will have a great wikipedia article. I'm going to continue to check your page to see if you added anything and run through and if i run across any information i will be sure to let you know. Again great start!!!1013-precious 03:43, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
- gracias. 1013-andy 16:15, 2 May 2007 (UTC)
Hey andy,
I was searching the internet trying to brain storm some ideas for you and i ran across a website that talks about the coastal impacts and a variety of other things that could help you in your article. So check it out and let me know if it was useful. Adding a subsection on coastal impacts could be helpful. http://www.astro.psu.edu/users/alex/astro497_2.pdf.1013-precious 19:14, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

