Talk:Comandante Ramona

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Hi, I've just addedmy first POV tag, so if I've misuesd it, apologies. It seems to me that the tone of the article is overly praiseworthy. While I have no doubt that Comandante Ramona did much for her cause, I wonder if phrases like "remarkable" should be used in the opening line of the article.

Tone


This article reads more like a hagiography than a biography! --Ror 15:58, 29 January 2006 (UTC)

That is right! No one can edit the page because they do not know about this REMARKABLE woman. They are ready to criticize, but not to learn.

[edit] == um.. ==

[edit] um..

Then edit it, and dont complain. That is what wikipedia allows you to do.

You might also try "researching" the subject before you flag it at least.