Talk:Christian von Alvensleben

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[edit] needs cleanup

A lot of extraneous, irrelevant information. A good edit could trim a lot of this out. Does appear, to me, to pass the notability test, so am just tagging it for general cleanup Brian 11:51, 13 June 2007 (UTC)btball

Would you like to explain what could be improved for ex? The article already is a reduced version of its german original. As requested earlier, many references and background information have been added. TIA! Rgb2cmyk 09:05, 12 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] independent verification

The article made great claims for Christian von Alvensleben's business, based on the word of Christian von Alvensleben. Uh, no. It has to quote some other source. (In reality, that other source might well be merely an unthinking recycler of Christian von Alvensleben's press releases, but at least it had the opportunity to doubt and to ask questions.) -- Hoary 23:08, 7 August 2007 (UTC)