Talk:Break of Reality

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The history needs to be re written in a more encyclopedic voice

There was at least on case of being written in first person.

I am cleaning up this (Esoltas)

I removed this sentence They are a contemporary of the band Apocalyptica. because I don't recognize the significance. RJFJR 18:10, 16 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

I think that, once the names and dates we need are obtained, we can take this off the cleanup taskforce's list. Sophy's Duckling 02:47, 17 June 2006 (UTC)