Talk:Boronia railway station, Melbourne

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I made a few changes to wording, but I really think that a lot of this is irrelevant detail that doesn't need to be in the article. Philip J. Rayment 05:32, 6 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I agree. I wouldn't call Busybodies or McDonalds landmarks. The platform details need tidying, and the information about coin-only ticket machines and the amount of validating machines seems excessive. Obviously the redevelopment of the station a few years ago is much more pertinent, I might make this a task for tomorrow. Cnwb 05:44, 30 Nov 2004 (UTC)

The station was redeveloped in 1998, to alleviate the dangerous and cumbersome crossing at the intersection of Dorset Road and Boronia Road. I still haven't had time to track down anything more than that, but I'll get there eventually. Cnwb 05:49, 6 Dec 2004 (UTC)

I have rewritten most of this article, based on the same style as Box Hill railway station, Melbourne and Laburnum railway station, Melbourne. I have also added

I skimmed out the bits about McDs nearby, "landmarks", and about what types of money the ticket machines accept. I have copied most of the information excluding what I mentioned then. I'm not good at writing articles, so try to correct my writing style if you can. Somebody in the WWW 00:27, 12 Dec 2004 (UTC)