Talk:Bonnie Bergin

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[edit] March 2008

This article has a few major problems:

• It is way too long
• It has bad formatting
• It is written like an autobiography
• The format is not clear and is confusing

Tags have been added to this page. If the above issues are addressed, there shouldn't be a problem Olly₁₅₀ 18:36, 18 March 2008 (UTC)

In addition, some of the prose is very "flowery" - some of the stuff about the travels reads like a travel guide, etc. I fixed some of it but it needs more major work. – ukexpat (talk) 15:29, 25 March 2008 (UTC)

I'm not sure where you get your info about the conflict of interest. I wish we could do instant messages or speak on the phone. The wiki people are giving me a very hard time with this page & I'm not sure how to fix 100% of those issues.

I will shorten it a lot in the next few days. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Pierrerivard (talk • contribs) 17:20, 4 April 2008 (UTC)