Talk:BladeLogic

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Statements such as "dramatically cut data center costs" are, in my opinion, not neutral. The general phrasing of this artical makes it sound like an advertisement, the mentionedquote being the most explicit example.

[edit] Are the edits OK?

Hi,

Content keeps getting reverted to a 3 line summary.

I have made changes, and I don't think anything here is like an "advertorial".

Are these changes OK?

Mark.