Talk:Berwick High
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[edit] Complete rewrite required
The article at present is not written from a neutral point of view. Although we all have enthusiasm for our schools (I have passed school age) it needs to be written neutrally. It can't include phrases like, 'The tennis team is extremely strong,' as this is not neutral, it is biased. It should simply state their state wins. When stating the information it should also be referenced, which can be difficult but is needed. Look to see if there are links available to public sources that report on the games. It also has very little information which could be added to. Overall it needs to be completely rewritten. Ksbrown 19:37, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
One could argue that 'The tennis team is extremely strong' could be a true statement if the team had a large number of victories, but in the current state, it seems somewhat redundant. I went ahead and updated the page with some info from their website and Google, but wasn't sure of the best way to solve the neutrality issue. --Revised 03:18, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
I am going to add the more recent events from last year into it by their school website and google. -- BHS student 4:04, January 2008 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.222.18.64 (talk) 22:05, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
