Talk:Bath Fringe Festival
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i'd like some help here particularly on referencing "Bath Fringe" has 12000+ refs on Google but no-one's written a book on it and most of the Google references are people performing there, etc.
i can probably dig out references to particular points, if they survive more experienced editing
as far as style goes (yes i know that's an automatic response), anyone can reading this can see it's heavily laced with my opinion on why i think Bath Fringe is important. I think the article needs a different construction but i'm not sure i know where to start, so i started with what you read there...
Zeno the youngest (talk) 16:19, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
I can't seem to get my head round how to change the "what links here" I listed two wiki pages that already mention Bath Fringe in the text, and i know that's the wrong place apols. Zeno the youngest 18:48, 4 December 2007 (UTC)
- To change "what links here", go to the pages them selfs and add a link to this article. Already done for Bath, Somerset.R00m c (talk) 22:35, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
- Some pointers for improvement. Start with the opening paragraph. The opening paragraph does not need to be titled. The fist thing to address is, "What is Bath fringe festival?". Be obvious so that any one who comes here and does not know,(like me) can quickly understand what we are talking about. You could stat out like "The Bath fringe festival is ..." Where does it happen; is this only in one country? As for referencing, any fact listed needs to have a reference. It is best if you list the reference after the sentience, as this makes it easier for other to check the references of specific points.R00m c (talk) 19:16, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
- Well, I went ahead and started making the improvements my self. R00m c (talk) 22:25, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Style, NPOV, what links etc
I've made some major edits to bring this article more into line with WP:MOS and tried to make it more WP:NPOV and added some links from other relevant pages, and added stub tags & categories. Therefore I removed all the banners. I hope these are useful.— Rod talk 08:21, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

