Talk:Ballistics (video game)
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[edit] GA passed
Just some notes to make it better;
- Triotech Amusement is a redlink - it should probably be created, since I'd say they're notable for producing this game at least.
- Can we get sources for the release dates?
- The gameplay section could probably be trimmed, it's slightly crufty as is. We don't need to know every detail about how to play the game, just the basics of "accelerate, steer, win"
- Are you sure all those images are free? The website wouldn't load for me, so I'll take your word for it...
- Ref 12: RePlay (magazine) is a redlink. Create the page or remove the link.
Dihydrogen Monoxide (H2O) 01:39, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
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