Talk:Asleep in the Park

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[edit] Advertisement sections

Lines like:

• to create an appealing sound characterised by the fusion of these distinctive vocals
• releasing a hugely successful debut album
• an evolved sound, punchy new songs and enough beer to make a grown man cry

and especially the entire section on Let You Go, such as:

• Let You Go can be purchased on CD from the band and has also been released under the Creative Commons "Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs" licence and can be downloaded from popular torrent sites.

reflect biased promoting, which Wikipedia is not. Australian Matt 07:14, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

• I've removed most of the problem material Australian Matt 07:31, 3 October 2007 (UTC)