User talk:Artistical
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Thank you for your contributions to the following article: University of the Arts London.
Unfortunately, however, I had to revert back to your first edition as the editions that followed failed to retain a neutral point of view with many claims not being cited, see: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view
Furthermore, as a student at the University myself, the department section fails to represent or apply to every college, thus should be included on the respective college's own article, rather than the University's which is more general.
Lastly, the wording, grammar and tone of voice needed improvement. Fineite (talk) 15:53, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
