Portal talk:Ancient Egypt/Intro

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• I have shortened the introduction here, as the last sentences are long winded, unnecessary and factually dubious (in my opinion)! Markh 11:59, 10 May 2006 (UTC)

I have no problems with the sentence structure as well. --Siva1979^{Talk to me} 15:39, 10 May 2006 (UTC)