Talk:Yoshinkan

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Contents 1 Style template 2 In need of work 3 Good Job So Far 4 Restoration of Dojo links and videos

[edit] Style template

While Yoshinkan definately is a major style of aikido, I find that the template about "major styles" adds little to the article but adds the problem about the definition of "major style". I have removed the template from the articles and started a discussion at Template talk:Major styles of aikido. // habj 11:56, 5 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] In need of work

This article needs a lot of work. I'm not a member of this style and only know a little about it, so would be happy for help from a member who knows how WP articles are supposed to be written. Currently the article sounds too much like a handbook and has a POV feel. And the links to videos and all but the first two external links have got to go. I'll get to this if no one better qualified does. Djiann (talk) 07:11, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Good Job So Far

I myself do hold a Shodan in Yoshinkan, and think this article is rather good, but should have some more specific information, like in what year Shioda Gozo opened the Yoshinkan.

--APDEF (talk) 02:25, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Restoration of Dojo links and videos

To 66.41.255.55: I'd like to know your justification for putting these links back. I removed them based on solid WP policy. I don't like edit wars, but I will remove them again unless you can justify the action. Djiann (talk) 02:25, 13 April 2008 (UTC)