Talk:Yevgeny Ivanov

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  • He was born in Pskov. I have his self biography "the naked spy", and it gives a considerably different view on the Profumo affair. Of course, he is a part in this. VLE 22:43, 3 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Editorial Tone vs. Vernacular

"Keeler's subsequent affair with Profumo went on at a time when she was also sleeping with Ivanov. This was at a time when Cold War tensions were getting hotter as a result of the Cuban Missile Crisis."

I don't mean to be pedantic but a more proper editorial tone needs to be used; the previous lines are entirely too casual. Changed "sleeping" to "romantically involved" and "getting hotter" to "heightening". *** 2/23/08 by Philosopher2king —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.105.163.162 (talk) 03:20, 25 February 2008 (UTC)