Talk:William E. Brown

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[edit] Cleanup

Hi, I'm the guy that tagged this article and the Archbishop Timothy Paul Baymon article with the cleanup tags. I really appreciate the work that has gone into these articles up to this point, and I'm not trying to cause any offense whatsoever, but this one does not read like an encyclopedia at all at some points. "As God continued to elevate him to the ranks of Bishop, he was chosen by God to become the Third Presiding Bishop..." I am a Christian, and this *is* how we speak in church and among our brethren, but this is not how an encyclopedia ought to read. It would be great to check out WP:REF and WP:NPOV in particluar for some guidelines on how to clean up this article. I'd be glad to help out and answer any questions. Have a nice day Nswinton 15:15, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup #2

Images removed:

• [[Image:ArchbishopSealFIG.jpg|Seal of the Archbishop]]
• [[Image:Bishops college 039.jpg| Archbishop Brown]]

Infobox removed:

Styles of Archbishop William (EUSEBUIS)
Reference style	His Eminence
Spoken style	Archbishop Brown
Alternative style	None

These things have been moved here so that they can be replaced at a later time when they won't clutter the article, and will actually add to the contextual content.

This article needs to be refrenced and significantly expanded. Nswinton 00:59, 26 April 2007 (UTC)