Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Requests/William Cooley

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Copyedited by Unimaginative Username (talk) – 06:32, 25 November 2007 (UTC)

Proofread by Finetooth (talk) – 03:13, 6 December 2007 (UTC)

• English isn't my mother tongue, and I am at a loss on further improving the article, more in the sense that I am not sure of what the problems are. Thanks. --Legionarius 22:02, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

This article appears to have been promoted to FA on October 8, 2007. Is a copy-edit still required? It would seem not. Unimaginative Username (talk) 07:09, 19 November 2007 (UTC)

I'd say it's not the highest priority, but much of the language still reads very awkwardly--lots of short, disjointed sentences that don't really flow well. I'd say keep it around. --Malachirality (talk) 21:04, 22 November 2007 (UTC)

Took a brief look and agree on need for c/e (should have been done before FA). Will make this the next one on my to-do list. Unimaginative Username (talk) 23:55, 24 November 2007 (UTC)

Done up to through "New River Massacre". Taking a short break. Should finish within a few hours, I hope. Unimaginative Username (talk) 02:08, 25 November 2007 (UTC)