Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Requests/Amy Diamond

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Copyedited by Lazulilasher (talk) – 04:52, 29 December 2007 (UTC)

Copyedited by Esprit15d • talk • contribs – 18:58, 9 January 2008 (UTC)

Proofread by Galena11 (talk) – 17:32, 5 February 2008 (UTC)

• Written by a non-native English speaker and failed a GA nomination due to the language. It has been worked on since, but may still need attention. Moorvis 05:58, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
• I did a bit of work on this article and it reads correctly as far as grammar/language is concerned. Not sure if it's up to GA status, but it's definitely an interesting read. Lazulilasher (talk) 04:52, 29 December 2007 (UTC)
• I went through and copyedited. The article has a strong start but still needs a lot of work. The biggest problem is the information is not grouped in the most efficient manner, and the article reads like a fansite.--Esprit15d • talk • contribs 18:58, 9 January 2008 (UTC)