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[edit] Peer review
WikiProject Ice Hockey articles that are in peer review.
They are still submitted at Wikipedia:Peer review, but placing them here is likely to ensure a greater and more detailed response from knowledgable editors.
[edit] Instructions
Follow the instructions at Wikipedia:Peer review, then edit this page here, pasting {{Wikipedia:Peer review/ARTICLE NAME}} at the top of the list of nominees.
[edit] Articles
[edit] British ice hockey league champions
- A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for June 2008.
I've been working on this article for a few weeks in my sandbox and have just loaded the rewritten version onto the article. I'd like to get it to featured list eventually. I appreciate that more references may be needed, but I'm not entirely sure where. The bulk of this article has been done with the two books listed as the primary sources so I have just placed inline references where I think it's most neccessary. If there's anywhere else that needs a citation then please point it out. The top points scorer between 1956 and 1960 has also proved tricky. I've spoken to the author of the books I use as sources and he tells me that the Ice Hockey World Annual, which is the primary source of information for the first professional era of hockey in the UK, did not publish after it's 1956 edition and that statistics for that period aren't presently known.
Thanks in advance for any comments and suggestions. KimThePanther (talk) 20:43, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Calgary Tigers
I've significantly expanded this article after finding a couple of extremely good books on Alberta's hockey history. My goal is to get it to good article status at least, and hopefully to featured article status, if I can find some good images, which is quite difficult given the time frame of the Tigers' existence. My biggest concern is the quality of the prose, as I tend to be much better with lists than prose. All feedback is appreciated. Thanks! Resolute 03:08, 1 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Joe Sakic
[edit] Gilbert Perreault
I've listed this article for peer review because a debate has been going on at User_talk:RGTraynor#Gilbert_Perreault regarding
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- RGTraynor edits,
- TonyTheTiger partial revert,
- RGTraynor revert,
- TonyTheTiger line by line item by item revert (see edit summaries).
We have taken the article to the talk page of both WP:HOCKEY and WP:WPBIO with no response. We need some opinions on the level of referencing.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 14:58, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Automated review
[edit] Yannismarou
- A picture of him would be helpful, but I do not know if it is easy to find one.
- "Blessed with an uncanny ability to stickhandle in close quarters, he was regarded as one of the most gifted and skillful playmaking centers ever to play the game." Hmmm ... "Blessed with" etc. tend to be a bit POV IMO.
Done--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 14:01, 3 October 2007 (UTC) - Anything about his personal life?
- Per WP:MOS, do not wikilink single years ("In 1969 and 1970"), only full dates. Done--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 14:01, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
- Try not to have uncited paragraphs like the second in "Professional career".
- The two templates you have after Statistics go at the end of the article. Done--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 14:01, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
- Trim as much as you can the "See also" section, incorporating links in the main text.
- I did not follow all the debate, but I tend not to agree with the opinion that "Items of readily provable fact, such as that Perreault is a Hall of Famer or the years during which he was named an All-Star, are already cited in the general references and the external link and do not require a cloud of jarring inline citations." I am from Greece, and I know nothing about him, so this stuff for me is not "readily provable fact". I need verifiable sources, convincing me that everything you state and assume is accurate.--Yannismarou 11:25, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
