Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Peer review/Mulholland Drive (film)

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[edit] Mulholland Drive (film)

I saw this movie about 2 weeks ago or so and it intoxicated me. So I did my best to read everything I could and added to the article accordingly. I would like to know its potential for FA, since I've not written a film article to this extent before. I would like to know what to add, remove, alter, clean up, and clarify. Your assistance is appreciated, and thank you for reading the article. --Moni3 (talk) 12:42, 10 April 2008 (UTC)

Very well written, with extensive referencing, and an attempt to establish a neutral voice being successful. My minor concerns remain that there is an inconsistency in dating and citation formats. A final assessment may have to wait since I am recusing myself from a full review. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 17:30, 12 April 2008 (UTC).

Noted about inconsistencies in formatting citations. I'm going to have it go through LOCE for punctuation and prose, and ask someone to assist with going over references before FAC. I appreciate your time and input, Bzuk. --Moni3 (talk) 17:51, 12 April 2008 (UTC)