Wikipedia:WikiProject Birds/Peer review/Laysan Duck

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[edit] Laysan Duck

I haven't worked much on this article, but I've been monitoring its expansion and growth by other editors. I think this article has good FA potential, and I just upgraded it from Start to B-Class for the Hawaii project. Basically, I'm looking for experts on the bird project to make any suggestions for improvement on the Hawaii end of things. I would also appreciate any collaboration between the two projects. —Viriditas | Talk 12:10, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

OK, it is well onthe way - I've tweaked the layout so it is like other bird FAs. It needs a lead to summarise salient points - touch on description etc. I defined the taxonomy section next. I've only spent 24 hours in Hawaii in my life so am unfamiliar with what Laysan means or how to pronounce it for that matter. Need dimensions in description. Maybe a section on hwere to see them - are there any in Honolulu zoo? More to come. cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:39, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Thanks, and good work. I can help out with the lead, and I'll look for more info about the zoo tomorrow. —Viriditas | Talk 08:28, 29 October 2007 (UTC)