Talk:Westminster Choir College

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Certain passages in this article may require revision, if not deletion, on account of their unencyclopedic tone. The introductory paragraph, in particular, is written in language better suited to an advertisement for Westminster Choir College than to an encyclopedia article about it. Also, the "Performance and Concert Reviews" section does not contribute any factual information to the article and therefore falls outside the scope of an encyclopedia article. Ought we to delete this section?

 I have revised the first paragraph to give it a more neutral tone.
                                                                     -74.225.101.73 12/26/07  —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.225.101.73 (talk) 13:03, 26 December 2007 (UTC)