Talk:Warren Ryan

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This article is more like a Warren Ryan job application than a Wikipedia entry. It needs to be rewritten from a NEUTRAL point of view. WWGB 13:03, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

Rewrite attempted. Is this better?

[edit] Neutrality

Yes the article is gushy, but all the claims about his coaching career are statements of fact including the success of those who played under him and went on to coach. Only the claim "and is perhaps the most respected rugby league mind in the business" could be called NPOV and it's now deleted. More comment and review please on this disputed neutrality. Obviously it could do with some citations and references. -Sticks66 13:11, 28 May 2007 (UTC)