User talk:Victory721

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Hello Victory721, welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Our intro page contains a lot of helpful material for new users - please check it out! If you need help, visit Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on this page and someone will show up shortly to answer your questions.

I appreciate that you promote environmental technology‎, but please be a bit careful not to add unsourced statements or to spam Wikipedia. Before adding more external links to companies or writing statements like "Company X is a leader in the industry", please read our guidelines Wikipedia:Spam and Wikipedia:Verifiability. — Sebastian 04:13, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

I cleaned up after your edits, but when I got to your new article waterless carwash, I gave up. Frankly, it's nowhere near an encyclopedic article. It omits the most basic information, such as a clear definition of the term, and instead throws paragraphs full of marketing blurb at the reader. It lists a long list of substances it does not contain instead of describing what it does contain. Most of its content is off topic, about drought, which is already covered elsewhere. As it stands, this is clearly a candidate for speedy deletion, and it's only because I sympathize with efforts to help the environment that I am only tagging it with a cleanup tag instead. Please, go through the article and cut all fluff, and add real definitions and descriptions, before someone else speedily deletes it. — Sebastian 05:14, 23 October 2007 (UTC)