Talk:Váli (son of Odin)

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Sigyn's page claims she's Vali's mother. Needs to be fixed on one of the page at least. JidGom 15:46, 20 Aug 2003 (UTC)

[edit] Wording of first bit.

The phrase "Vali (ON: Váli) was in Norse mythology a son of the god Odin (Old Norse: Óðinn) and the giantess Rindr." isn't good grammar as it stands. The reader gets as far as "Vali was in Norse mythology", which seems like a full sentence, then doesn't know how to interpret the "a son of the god..." correctly. I hope you like the version with just the commas. I agree about the flow. I'll help you in putting the commas in all the other articles if you want --Mike C | talk 10:25, 22 October 2005 (UTC)

Has been replied on Mike's talk page. Mark 11:45, 22 October 2005 (UTC)