Talk:Unforgiven (2006)
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[edit] pre-GA review
[edit] Lead
What do you mean by the suspended belt? It should be either made more clear or removed.
[edit] Pictures
Captions should not end in a period if they are not full sentences.
[edit] Background
Make clear what a "spinner belt" is.But Cena would interrupt and inform Edge, that if he [Cena] got another opportunity at the WWE Championship and losing the match to Edge, Cena would sign a contract deal with SmackDown! and leave Edge's life for good. has many problems.Edge agreed to it, adding that he would be the one to choose when and where the match happens, Cena agreed to the stipulation. - remove , Cena agreed to the stipulation.It's ridiculous to say This feud was the aftermath of SummerSlamShouldn't it say DX (kayfabe) vandalized Mr. McMahon's personal jet plane, the headquarters of the WWE, and McMahon's limousine. ?The McMahons viciously attacked DX, remove the comma.The first time DX is mentioned in the background it should say...D-Generation X (DX)he teamed up with his son Shane and Big Show removed his sonOne of the main undercard matches on the card --- undercard should be wiki-linked, since it is the first time in the section, and remove on the cardOne of the main undercard matches on the card was between Lita and Trish Stratus for the WWE Women's Championship. Lita and Edge began a feud with Trish Stratus and Carlito, after Edge and Lita interrupted Stratus' title match with Mickie James, all four began to brawl with one another, leading to a tag match, where Edge and Lita would come out winning the match. is three lines long. I needs to be split into two-three sentences and re-worded.Which led to Lita and Edge attacking Stratus', only to involve Carlito, who was in an relationship angle with Stratus, to brawl with Lita and Edge. - needs a ref, and do not start the sentence with "Which led"- Which led to a scheduled tag team match between Lita and Edge versus Stratus and Carlito, in which Edge and Lita would come out as the winners of the match. again, don't start the sentence with "Which led"
[edit] Event
Combine the first four paragraphs, they are all too short.As the match began, both men took the upper hand over each other. re-word that.Again here, The match saw both teams take the advantage over each other.Split this into two sentences, The members of the Squad, who were at ringside, interfered in the match and gave the upper hand to their teammates, as Mikey was able to pin Rory after a Facebuster, thus able to retain the World Tag Team titles. The split can come after "teammates" and by removing ", as"Put DX in parenthesizes the first time D-Generation X appears.DX pulled Big Show's trunks down, after Michaels performed Sweet Chin Music on Big Show and shoved the elder McMahon's head up Big Show's buttocks. - needs to be re-worded. Also change elder McMahon to Vince.Combine the 6th and 7th paragraphsRe-word Carlito springboarded moonsaulted from each side of the ring, and Carlito's elbow caught Orton in the mouth on the second one, as the result of Orton bleeding from the mouth. to Carlito springboarded moonsaulted from each side of the ring. His elbow caught Orton in the mouth on the second moonsault causing Orton to bleed from the mouth.Cena took the early advantage over Edge. remove "early"Re-word or cut down During the length of the match, Cena sandwiched Edge in a ladder, with Edge in the middle of the ladder, Cena applied the STFU hold on Edge, which Edge tapped out toand crashing through a table at ringside crashing ---> crashed
Done with the event. iMatthew 2008 22:07, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- The comment about being impressed with the Hardy/Nitro match was not sarcasm, but I removed it because it has nothing to do with the review. iMatthew 2008 10:28, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Aftermath
The second sentence in the second paragraph should not start with Untilsending Kane of the brand, insert "Raw" before brand.Mention that he went to Smackdown before the next sentence.Nitro retaining the title. - change retaining to retained.Reliable source needed for seventh Women's tournament
You do not advance in a "Women's title tournament match". You advance in a tournament.- This may be debatable but I do not think it's good to substitute "Championship" with "title", as in "Intercontinental title". Either way, "Championship" is the official name.
"Mini-feud". It could be argued. Just "feud" would be sufficient.'so-called "Champion of Champions"'. Remove "so-called".- "viewers voting on..." Viewers only?
--13 of Diamonds (talk) 21:36, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Results
This was Stratus' retirement match. needed to be sourced
Done with everything. iMatthew 2008 10:35, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
