Talk:Tyramine

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[edit] Cleanup

Hi, I have had a go at cleaning up tyramine but appart from a lack of references (in particular in the last paragraph - we need to track down the "recent review article") I cannot see very much wrong with it. Could you give me more information on what you think is wrong with the article? Cheers, Andreww 09:58, 30 October 2005 (UTC)

The main thing is, it's really two independent chunks of text, with little to connect them. The second and third paragraphs say pretty much the same thing in two different ways, and the only section that covers restricted tyramine diets (only in passing) is the fourth, which is a solid wall of text poorly formatted for online reading.
I'm also really curious about where the material from [1] and [2] came from. My suspicion is that we technically shouldn't be using the last two paragraphs at all, and ought to rewrite them entirely. ᓛᖁ♀ 12:09, 30 October 2005 (UTC)


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I suspect that tyramine is not "degraded to octopamine" look at the structures; I think that the second paragraph should be cut out. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Threelegduck (talkcontribs) 02:31, 11 May 2008 (UTC)