Talk:Treaty of Ganghwa
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The date is incorrect, the Treaty Of Kanghwa was signed on 1876 February 27. 128.59.233.147 22:05, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] article needs revising
This article needs a lot of work. There are many factual errors I can see upon first glance such as the statement that the Unyo fired first, which aside from being inaccurate is illogical as the whole purpose behind provoking the incident was to get the Koreans to fire first. I'll edit the article after I gather sufficient resources if no one has any objections.Umetaro 21:44, 14 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] I made a few changes
I fleshed out the detail of the Unyo incident. As Umetaro points out, the Unyo did not fire first, though from a Korean perspective it may as well have; its actions were entirely provocative. There were also many spelling and idiomatic errors that are typical of translation, and I corrected those. If there are other factual errors, I'll leave those to others more qualified than I. Davidcharlesfreund 07:38, 2 December 2006 (UTC)

