Talk:The Regis School of the Sacred Heart/Comments

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This article has been checked against the following criteria for B-Class status:

  • Referencing and citation: fail
It is not suitably referenced, and all major points are not appropriately cited.
  • Coverage and accuracy: pass
The article is a basic overview of the school and could use additional development. Expand the "Goals and criteria" section.
  • Structure: pass
It has a defined structure, including a lead section and one or more sections.
  • Grammar: pass
It is free from major grammatical errors.
  • Supporting materials: pass
It contains appropriate supporting materials, such as an infobox, images, or diagrams.
  • Additional comments:

The financial information section reads like an advertisement or brochure. Maybe this can be revised.

Assessment: B class, Importance: Mid -- Postoak 03:16, 8 May 2007 (UTC)


By "reds link and advertisement" do you mean "reads like an advertisement"? Do you have any suggestions as to how I can improve it? Thanks —Travis C/T\U 13:36, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
The Regis School of the Sacred Heart#Financial information revised. —Travis C/T\U 14:01, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Updates

  • History reference added
  • Goals and criteria referenced and slightly expanded
  • Financial information greatly simplified and referenced
  • Board of trustees section added and referenced

—Travis C/T\U 15:12, 8 May 2007 (UTC)